56 George street,
New-York
29 April, 2010

Columbia university
13 Jersey Street.
New York, NY.


Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing this letter in response to an article I read about a new course, which is about to be opened in the next month.

I was told all your courses are excellent and I am interesting(gr.) in attending a course of "Medical Care for Animals". I am currently a student at "Understanding the brain of the animals" in the local university. I desire to know more about animals then the thought process of animals(phr.).

I also take courses of(ww. - in) biology and chemistry at the local university and I see many programs on the "National Geographic" channel, so I know a lot about animal diseases and how they can be cured. When I have free time I usually volunteer at veterinarians' clinics or animals societies, so I have experience in taking care of animals.

I would be grateful if you could send me more information about the course "Medical Care for Animals".

Best regards,

Leona Lawis

Very good.
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Daphna

56 Avenue street,
Holon
10 November, 2012

See the World

13 Jersey Street.

New York, NY.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

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My fiancé and I have been planning to go on a(ww. - our) honey-moon to the US for a month. We are interested in going on an organized tour with an English-speaking guide.

We are interested in making this trip unforgettable and full of new adventures. We are the kind of people who like to expand our horizons and learn new things. We would like to see zoos and circuses and special places like the Coronado Island and the Napa valley.

We would like to know the cost of every popular site. Can you give us information about the hotels there and their costs? Should we stay in the best hotels or are the hostels are(מיותר) enough? What kind of transportation should we use? As you see we can(ww. - need) some more information.

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We would be grateful and appreciate any kind of help you can give us. Looking forward for help(ww.), thank you very much(phr.)

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Sincerely yours,

Claire Bennet

Good work.

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Daphna

A radio show for teens

59 Lavon Street
Holon, Israel
April 6, 2010

The Manager's Office
"109 fm" Radio Station
67 Hahalutch Street
Rehovot, Israel

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have heard about your attention(ww.) to produce a one-hour program for the youth. As a constant listener of the local station I would like to convey my suggestion for the new upcoming program.

I suggest you to give the youngsters the opportunity to call and ask for advices(מיותר). I think that you should employ a psychologist who will answer the teenagers' questions and help them.

From the beginning of the elementary school and until finishing(ww. - the end of) the(מיותר) high-school teenagers all over the world have to deal with different kinds of problems (social, economical, studies, and family). During their adolescence teenagers make lots of important decisions and in 99% of them they need advice. In addition, it is very easy to influence the teenagers due to the less(ww. - lack of) experience they have. If the teenagers are not careful or sometimes desperate they might go off track. Some of the teenagers don't have friends they can trust on(מיותר), or parents to rely on, and they need help.

I believe that starting this kind of program will gain your radio station more popularity. Furthermore, the most important thing this program will do is help the youth make the right decisions. Who knows…it might change someone's life.

Yours truly,
Laura bennet.

Very good work
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Daphna