Gadna is an Israeli military program which prepares youth for their mandatory military service in the Israel Defense Forces. My class and I went on a Gadna week last month. This was the most unique experience I have been through (in) my whole life.

I would like to exalt my commander was nothing like I expected, he was better. When we first met him he looked like all the other commanders, but soon we realized he was different. At(ww.) the first two days he did not gave(gr. + ww.) us any pushups(phr.), he didn't punished(gr.) us and he was very, very patient. He didn't have this look of "I hate you, and I hate being here" .If something made him laugh, he laughed, if something made him angry he talked with us about it. In all our duty-rosters he helped us, and whenever we got tiered(sp.) he encouraged us, and motivated us.

In spite of the face that shooting practice may sound intimidating, this was a lot of fun. During the Gadna week we learned how to hold a gun, what the gun (is) made up(מיותר) of. We learned how to enter a magazine(what?), and how to direct and strike(ww.) our target. The shooting practice lessons were taken very seriously. Anyone who didn’t took(gr.) part or disturbed the commander during the lesson did not shoot(ww. - participate). At first, I was very nervous because I never shoot(gr.) a gun before. I wanted to quite(sp.) but I knew that I would regret it. The shooting practice turned out to be one of the most exiting things I have ever done in my life. The feeling of holding a gun and do(gr.) something I will probably never get the chance to do again was great.

I think that this week was an unforgettable experience. I made friendships with people I never met, and I renew(gr.) old connections. I got the chance to try new and different things. I learned new values and acquired new skills. I know that if somebody will give(gr.) me a chance to come back on a Gadna week(phr.), I will not hesitate and start packing my suitcases

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Daphna

21 Bialik street
Tel Aviv
february 11, 2010


Ms. Cathy Holmes
(Name of the travel agency)
106 Pioneer street,
Nevada

Dear Sir/Madam(ww. - Ms. Holmes),

I have been a satisfied customer of your agency for almost five years. However, the last trip I tool(ww.) on February 1, 2012 was not satisfactory. There were many reasons. The room's(מיותר) service (at the hotel....we stayed) was lame and the tour guide wasn't friendly.

In the light of the information given above I would like to add more information(what?). The tour guide was apathetic and when we asked him questions and showed interest, he ignored us. Moreover, instead of explaining information(phr.) to us he fell asleep on the bus.

In addition, the room service(explain where) was awful. After sitting on a hot bus for 5 hours we wanted to freshen up before dinner. When we opened the bathroom door, to our amazement, these(ww.) was one little face towel. We called room service and we got the towels 4 hours later when we were asleep.

I am confident that it is not your policy to provide such bad service. I am sure you want your customers to be satisfied. If I don't get full compensation I will go to a lawyer(phr.) and furthermore publish this letter in the "Jerusalem Post", where my aunt works.

Very truly yours,

Ashton Kutcher

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Daphna