(this was taken from last year booklet if all three modules. Unseen number 8.)
All over the world teenagers work in all kind(s) of jobs, cleaning, serving (or) selling, and even selling lemonade in the streets. Teenagers work during school and after school, but what is a better choice? Does it make difference on our studying(phr.), our social life(gr. - lives) or maybe even our maturation(ww. - you mean: maturity)?
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But first, we need to find out what is it (that) really that(מיותר) attracts so many students to work? Maybe it is the benefit of earning money and the ability to do with the money whatever we want, without anyone telling us whether it is alright or not. Or maybe it is the freedom that we feel when we have our own job and act all(ww. - like) grownups all the(ww. - of a) sudden? But whatever it is, everything can be summed up by one word - independence.
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I believe that a job evolve(ww.+gr.) in us all(מיותר) responsibility, maturity and independence,(New sentence) it helps us make the right decisions and gives us a pick(ww.) into the grownups' world, which we will be part of him(מיותר). Will a job duration(ww.) school really help us and show us how to deal and be part of this new and scary grownup world? I don't think so, but I do believe that we will enter the adult world with less fear, more knowledge and definitely a smile on our face. - The last part is not clear.
To sum up, I really believe that a job can help us be more independence(ww.) in our lives. It can also make us more mature and responsible. I believe that everyone who can, and wants to have a job while being a student, should have one.
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