A long time ago the Greeks started to be curious about what ever was out there in space. They found out that there is a world out there, and then they started to explore it. It started by naming one of the planets, continued with realizing that there were lots of planets, and understanding that there was some order, and got as far as spaceships and walking on the moon.
On the one hand, we all know that the space exploration has been giving us lots of information, beginning with the discovery that the moon is not an illusion. In addition, the fact that there are more galaxies like ours and that there might be even worlds like ours, or living beings like us out there. Due to the new things that have been discovered, people are more curious about the sciences. The study of sciences had become more popular and it born lots of great minds and
On the other hand, space exploration has its own disadvantages, like the fact that the money scientists have been spending on the exploration could be so helpful for all the starving people in our world. The money could also help understanding cancer or AIDS or any other awful diseases. There are so many problems on our planet that need to be solved .
To sum up, I think that the exploration of space is important for the understanding of some
things like if there are any other living being, or strange climate changes or problomes on earth, but it would be better if we focus on saving our planet.
Hofit Levy
This is much better, but you still have to look out for grammar mistakes.
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