Date: 31.12.08.

Hello Chuck,
What's up? I hope you're doing fine without me…oh, and tell your sister I miss her. is there any snow now in New-York? and what's up at school?
Do you know what happened to me a few days ago?
Well…I was watching TV when my brother suddenly jumped on the couch and changed channel, I wanted to kill him, and suddenly I saw a scene which reminded me something very frightening that happened to me a few year(s) ago.

I was 13 years old, and I went on a trip with some cousins and their friends.
We slept in cute little wooden houses, and it felt like we were in a village. Only my cabbage(את כתבת : כרוב) was very far from the others. When we got there we found out that there were so many animals there, a lot of cats, and a lot of dogs! .

On the third and last night I was a little bored, and I wanted to go to be with my friends…the only problem was that I was so far from them, and between me and them there was a...large field of dry thorns…I went out from my cabbage(ww.) and went to my friend, as it got dark..., it started to get cold, two hours later I couldn't stand the cold and went to bring me a jacket. I started to walk and I was so frightened, the filed now looked darker, scarier, and longer. Suddenly, I saw a big white Labrador dog. I stopped and went to her, she was thrilled to see that someone were(gr.) paying attention to her. I kept going but she followed me, and to tell you the truth, I was glad that she was with me. It made me feel so good, like she was protecting me.

Well, eventually I took my jacket and went back to my friend with my new bodyguard. She was so cute, and I was so sad to leave her, I wanted to take here(sp.) with me, but my mom didn't allow me.

Whenever I see a white Labrador I remember her, and the good feeling she gave me. Ever since then, I have tried to convince my mom to bring me a dog. I really hope that someday she will get tired of me and will bring me a dog. Hoping to see you very soon,

yours,
Hofit Levy
HL

This is much better. Well done!
Daphna